I’m a fan of Dara Horn, but she’s wrong about this.

Dara Horn appeared this week on one of my favorite podcasts, 18Forty. If you haven’t heard of her till now, Horn is an extraordinary Jewish author, journalist, and thought leader. She’s written several (often award-winning) novels and a non-fiction book (also award-winning), and I’m a huge fan. Since 18Forty’s theme this month is BOOKS! BOOKS! BOOKS!, Horn is the perfect guest for Rabbi Bashevkin to invite onto the podcast.

Her conversation with Rabbi Bashevkin is fantastic. (You can listen here.) She’s funny, erudite, creative, and I thoroughly enjoyed the entire episode. Only, there’s one thing she said that is so laughably, demonstratively wrong, I had to vent about it on Twitter after listening to episode to the end.

And now I’m going to expand upon the Twitter thread here.

What is this thing that Dara Horn said which literally cracked me up because her own work proves her wrong? She said that “Books don’t teach morals.” (If that’s not a direct quote, it’s close.) Afterwards, she said that fiction writers don’t write with the intent to teach a moral (a blanket statement). And that books aren’t good at teaching morals.

Horn accurately starts off saying that every work of literature emerges from a set of beliefs. Those beliefs are largely sociocultural, but may be unique to the book itself. It is necessary to understand them even if you don’t share them in order to process the book. But then she says that blanket statement I mentioned above.

The cover to John Gardner’s ON MORAL FICTION, a classic on literature, writing, and art criticism.

As John Gardner points out, “Art is as original & important as it is because it does not start out with clear knowledge of what it means to say.” So, sure, many writers do not start off a project with a particular moral lesson in mind. But that doesn’t mean that the finished project is not imbued with values. In fact, according to Gardner, it’s through revision, retouching, re-envisioning as we edit our own work that we figure out what we really think about its themes. The final messaging might be very different than the original take we had at the inception of the project.

Nor does no intent by Horn to write a book with a moral message mean that no author starts off with the intent to convey one. Personally, some of my work starts off with a moral angle, some of it doesn’t. But it always ends with one. I’m pretty sure that Frank Herbert intended to teach his views about the nature of power and the way human cultures interact with the environment when he wrote DUNE. Ray Bradbury had Things to say about literacy and book banning when he wrote FAHRENHEIT 451. Octavia Butler’s THE PARABLE OF THE SOWER had things to say about power and race and religion. I’m pretty sure that Lisa See intended to teach a particular view about the nature of love when she penned PEONY IN LOVE (she’s still alive, so we could at least in theory ask her). I might not be performing at their level, but I’m in good company on this one thing.

In short, Horn’s blanket statement–like most blanket statements–has so many exceptions, it becomes meaningless.

But there’s more to kvetch about (because, yes, this is me kvetching).

Horn seems to think that a moral to a story means a clunky message provided by an author who wants to tell you what to think. However, you don’t have to tell people what to think to promote a moral vision. Merely by inviting the reader/viewer/listener to explore a particular perspective on a theme, you have led them to alter their interior moral landscape. This is the best artistic expression, according to Gardner.

…And I would argue that Horn’s own work demonstrates several very clear moral views, whether she intends it as such in a conscious way or not. For example:

  1. By weaving (in most of her fiction) Jewish past & Jewish present, she assures us that religion & even religiosity is not a thing relegated to the past.
  2. By showing characters who are both religious & non-religious, and by showing them making flawed choices, she demonstrates that she doesn’t think that religiosity makes you good, at least not religiosity alone.

If I delved into each of her books, I could find other moral positions unique to her books. If I recall correctly, for example, in IN THE IMAGE, Horn expresses a moral view that people chose the religious life often for psychological reasons, not theological ones. But I think I’ve made my point.

Even the desire to say, “Books don’t have to mean things,” or “Books don’t have to suggest a moral perspective,” is paradoxical. Saying, “I don’t want to teach my readers a lesson,” is a moral stance itself, because it’s the position, “I don’t think that we should be telling people what to think,” or “I think that we shouldn’t look to morals to make life choices and certainly not artistic ones,” or other similar value judgments.

And then I come to the oddest claim of all, that writing isn’t good at teaching morals. Aristotle said, “Every art and every inquiry, and similarly every action and choice, is thought to aim at some good; and for this reason the good has rightly been declared to be that at which all things aim.” (Nicomachean Ethics, Book One, Part 1)

Before Aristotle, Jewish literature already included the mashal. A mashal is an allegory, a short fiction intended to teach a lesson. They pepper Tanach. One whole book (Shir haShirim/Song of Songs) is composed of a single mashal. Another book (Mishlei/Proverbs) is called by the word mashal (“mishlei” being one what to pluralize the word) and includes many of them.

Other ancient societies used epic poems and narrative songs to teach people, young and old. Eventually, these were written as books. While some were based on myths, historical events, or the like, others were purely imaginary. And they all conveyed value systems, intentional or not.

Today, we live in a contentious society. There are those who ban books or want to do so…and they don’t do it because storytelling is meaningless. They do it because storytelling can affect changes in people’s personal values.

I primarily (although not exclusively) write for children. In moments of choice, adults have told me there are times where they think of a beloved story from childhood, and the message therein helps them make the choice. We feel jealous of someone else, and then we remember reading a Mimmy and Simmy story (by Yaffa Ganz) about how each felt her friend had the better life, and then after a prolonged stay with her friend, she realized her life was just right for her. And then we choose to accept that our own circumstances aren’t really so bad. There are times when we might be embarrassed by our unusual name, or other qualities we have which are uncommon, and then we remember Chrysanthemum (from the eponymus book by Kevin Henkes) and are reminded that our differences make us special.

IN SUM: If Dara Horn says, “I don’t intend to write moral lessons,” I believe her (although I think she does it unintentionally…see above). But to make a blanket statement about all fiction writers seems to ignore a huge body of evidence that fiction writers often have morality as part of their writing agenda. And that thing she overlooks (the moral weight of fiction) is the very thing that makes fiction so powerful.

Adina at Her Best finally up for sale!

adina cover-3While I have not gotten my copies yet (they are in transit, and they arrived in NYC on Thursday), Adina at Her Best is indeed on sale on the Menucha Publisher’s site.

In other fun news, I just posted a second video about writing picture books. This one is broadly applicable to all writing, especially narrative forms. It’s about getting into the heads of your readers and into the heads of your characters. You can view it here.

And I just got great feedback on some changes I made to the adult novel I’ve been trying to snag an agent for. (Thanks, Cy and Daniel!) I’m hoping that as soon as all the craziness surrounding the release of Adina is done, I’ll be able to get that query all polished up and out to some more agents.

 

Where have I been?

As usual, I have lots of good excuses for going missing on this blog. I completed my manuscript for NaNoWriMo, then immediately started work on some short stories…and THEN I started working on *another* novel, which I am hoping will hit the 50,000 word mark (G-d willing!) by the end of this week.

Many of my FB friends, family, and colleagues know I’ve been slowly shifting my writing away from venues which don’t include images of women or older girls. That means I’ve had to find new publications to publish my short stories, which used to appear primarily in Binah and Hamodia. Recently, I had a second piece appear on Hevria, and now I’m privileged to be the first fiction writer featured in the new women’s magazine, The Layers Project Magazine. My story featured there is entitled, “Taking the Plunge.”

One of the perks about this switch of venue is that I get to talk about all sorts of topics not usually covered in Haredi magazines. Even though a lot of my writing is for children, the two stories I link to above are for readers 16 years old and up.

While the piece on Hevria is free, to read the second story, you have to pay a subscription. The Layers Project Magazine would like to be able to pay its writers and staff, and so just like the print mags charge a fee for you to buy them, they are asking for a subscription. For a month, it’s $5.99 for unlimited access, and you get three free articles without subscribing. However, if you consider it’s a replacement for four issues of Binah or Mishpacha‘s Family First, or the like, it’s a cheaper option. (UPDATE: Accessing the story “Taking the Plunge” is now free!)

What I’m Reading Right Now: On Moral Fiction

A while back, EriOn Moral Fictionka Dreifus had recommended John Gardner’s On Moral Fiction, a slim volume dedicated to writing and literary criticism from the POV that an artist has a moral responsibility to their audience, and that art criticism should in part address how well the creator of a work of art has met that responsibility. The book dates from 1978, and it’s amazing how well it (thus far in my reading) stands up over time.

I’m only about three chapters in, and what strikes me most Continue reading

Fan mail: the way to make an author’s heart go pitter-patter

I haven’t been posting much this month because I’ve been very, very busy. Thank G-d, in a good way. After failing to write any fiction for a couple months, I wrote three short stories – bang! bang! bang! – and a few teensy other projects besides.

I had the kids home with me on Friday because of the Mid-Winter Vacation many Jewish schools stick between semesters. I was a bit under the weather and had to shop AND cook for Shabbos because I’d been too tired after painting with the kids and taking them to a museum on Thursday to do the grocery shopping then, as I usually do.

The exhaustion! The squabbles! The noise! It was ugly.

And then I opened up Inyan magazine and saw this:

Fan mail for The Perfect Shabbos

Instantly, all was better.

Exciting news! One book ready for orders, the other nearly ready!

When my husband checked the mail after Rosh Hashanah had ended, he found a couple packages for me in our mailbox from Createspace. In one, we found the proof of the anthology that I’ve been working on, Sliding Doors and other stories, and the other package contained the proof of Mazal’s Luck Runs Out. 

I’ve been spending the last couple days proofreading those books. In Sliding Doors, the font size suggested by the template was so small, I was afraid no one would be able to read it. I went back and increase it. I also had do a lot of clean-up on the italics. The stories in the collection were from different magazines, with different policies about how to handle foreign words. With so many Hebrew and Yiddish terms throughout the text, punctuating these terms consistently was a big job, and I didn’t catch them all before uploading files to Createspace.

Mazal had some similar issues, but I also discovered that I didn’t like the cover I’d designed. I spent a lot of time tinkering with it to get it right.

Sliding Doors is still not quite ready for release, but duh-duh-dah:

Here’s the link to Mazal’s Luck Runs Out!

It’s available already in paperback via Createspace and Amazon. If you order it now, you should receive it by Sukkos! And if you buy it…please post a review on Amazon! And tell other prospective readers if you like it!

The target audience is Jewish kids 8-11, the kids who like the stories in Mishpacha Junior, Binah Bunch, and so on. The main character of this novella is Mazal, a Persian girl living in Los Angeles. The average Orthodox girl will identify with her misadventures, but it was especially important to me to represent a strong Persian Jewish character, something rarely seen in kids’ fiction.

I hope to have news about the other book soon.

becca with proof 2

Here’s me, with the proof of Sliding Doors and other stories. It’s not quite ready yet for ordering.